Chapter 16: The War's Conclusion		15:56 on April 05, 2012	Quote.
JeanMarc Posts: 748 Moderator Watch: Disabled. Turn on?	This chapter will be told in order by Bowser Jr., Shadowluigi1014, RilezTNUKI, Sponge7325 and (finally) Eric. The world was WAY darker than a normal Mario world. It was as dark as nighttime, there were flashing fires, and a Mario-like Mario & Luigi series village. I followed Shadowluigi who entered the village. Koopa Guard: Stop! Surrender or die! Shadowluigi1014: Woa! We're here to help you guys! Can we see your leaders? Koopa Guard: No, they're gone fighting. You can go in the general store and visit our troops. Shadowluigi1014: Okay, we'll do that. Bowser Jr.: No, I won't. Shadowluigi1014: What? Bowser Jr.: I didn't have enough time to fight yet. I think it's my chance to try this baby for real. Besides, I think they'll need the extra help. Koopa Guard: He's right. Come, huh... Bowser Jr.: Bowser. Koopa Guard: Really? Bowser Jr.: Well, that's my nickname. Koopa Guard: Oh... I quickly climb on the fortifications' walls. Koopa Guard: Here, fire these cannons. Bowser Jr.: It's okay, I have my own projectiles. Koopa Guard: Okay, do as you want. By the way, my name's Fred, the general of the main entrance. Bowser Jr.: Okay. Fred: By the way, who were the other guys with you. Bowser Jr.: There's my brother Sponge, Eric, and Shadowluigi... Fred: Shadowluigi?! You mean the guys who saved Rilez's life? Bowser Jr.: Sounds like something he'd do... Fred: Wow. Now, less talking and more acting! Bowser Jr.: Right! There was a huge wave of Toads. They were at least 100. I started shooting Ice needles. I hit most of them. I quickly remembered Sponge's lessons with Eric and quickly got thirsty. I decided to use it once more. I made an ice slide from the wall to the ground. I went on it. I stabbed a Toad as I got on the ground. I then quickly began slaugthering Toads as they came. A toad tried to backstab me. I swirled my sword. Ice crawled on my skin. The sword broke with the contact of the ice. I just noticed the frozen steel made a samus-like armor. I tried shooting with the cannon. It worked greatly. Killed three in a single hit. Got more thirsty than with all the ice I shot before. ~~~Narrator Switch~~~ I entered in the general store. There were lots of koopas, goombas and bob-ombs, some playing cards, but most of them were too worried to even notice us. And there was a Toad eating pizza. Toad: 3 Humans enter. Goomba: Who are you guys? Are you fighting for Mario? Attack! Shadowluigi1014: No, we're looking for RilezTNUKI, he's a friend of mine. Koopa: He's the hero Rilez mentionned. All: Yeah! Toad: What happenning? We doing mass assault again? Eric: No, Toad, I don't think... Toad: No! Me not Toad! Me Retoard. Eric: Okay Retoard, want to come with us to Mario's camp? Retoard: No, Blue Toad said camp goes Boom! Eric: Uh oh. Want to fight with us? Retoard: Does that mean moar pizza? Eric: Yes... yes it does. Retoard: For Pizza! Shadowluigi1014: Okay, let's do the final march guys. This is probably it. Riley is counting on you guys. All: Yeah! We went out of the general store. The rest of the army followed us. We went out of the city by the main entrance. We met face by face Mario's army. Mario: Mama mia! Luigi: Humans! Blue Toad: You, you support the death of my brother you will die. He pulled a katana. He ran about 10 steps and jumped. He slashed... I used light powers to blind him. I ducked and jumped on his head. He shrank. He used a fireflower. He shot about 10 fireballs in a row. A shot of ice put out the fire. A puddle of water was on the ground. ???: Water! A dude with an ice samus suit came from our side and drank the water. He stood up, we saw it was Bowser Jr. Sponge7325: Bowser! Bowser Jr.: Woa, it's... Mario and Luigi! Sponge7325: Should we join them? Shadowluigi1014: Guys... Eric: Come on! Sponge7325: No. We won't. Bowser Jr.: You're right. I WILL! Sponge7325: Oh crap. I'll take care of him. We're now ennemies. ???: Shadow! Watch out! I turned around. Luigi was about to hit me on the head with his hammer. He tripped because of a tanooki tail. Tanooki: Shadow! Shadowluigi1014: Rilez! Behind him was another army of koopas. RilezTNUKI: IT IS ON, MARIO! ~~~Narrator Switch~~~ The tents in the camp were on fire. They should be in the camp by now. I ran around it and saw the troops. They all looked depressed. RilezTNUKI: What...? Koopa: Marth went in it by himself. He knew there was a trap so he decided to sacrifice himself. RilezTNUKI: No... Bob-Omb: Guys! Look! In the flames, it the despair came Marth. Marth: Dudes, here I go again. Hey Rilez. RilezTNUKI: Marth! How did you survive. Marth: Withdrew in my shell. RilezTNUKI: Oh... Let's go help the defending troops. Goomba: But we can't there fast enough. Marth: Yes we can. RilezTNUKI: How? Marth: Kick us, koopas and sit on one of us. We'll get there real there fast as we'll be in our shells. RilezTNUKI: That's brilliant! Let's do that! The bob-ombs and the goombas kicked some koopas and they slided alone. Then, we all went back by 3 steps, ran, kicked and jumped on a koopa each. I took a club from a toad corpse. It was long, kinda thin but was solid at the end, making it light but solid enough to endure hits. I think it could even survive to a couple sword slashes. As we went by, I kept swinging it on some Toad heads. I was a huge troop of toads. I steered Marth to there. I clubbed some toads. I saw Luigi, so I knew Mario was close. Luigi was holding the hammer over his head, ready to swing. He was about to hit another human. Probably... RilezTNUKI: Shadow! Watch out! I lifted up Marth, swung my tail a couple of times, which made Luigi fall, did a couple of barrel rolls, stood back up, holding Marth like a shield in my left hand and my club in my right, I shouted. RilezTNUKI: IT IS ON, MARIO! Mario came in front of me. He jumped, tried to crush me. I dodged. I swinged my club. He did a backflip to dodge it. He shot 3 fireballs. I blocked it with Marth's shell. I decided to take the club by the other end. He shot another fireball. I put the end of the stick in front. I caught on fire. Mario tried jump again. I pointed the stick in the air. He burned his butt and started shouting like a mexican, as he was burning and rebecame red. RilezTNUKI: Come on! I thought it would've been tougher. Mario: You're going down! He pulled out his hammer. I put out the fire at the end of stick with dirt at the same time. He swung the hammer as I swung my club. I felt vibrations in my arm. He looked okay. I jumped sideways. His hammer went on the ground. While he was lifting the hammer back up, I swung my club in his face. RilezTNUKI: Really? It looks like you will be meeting satan soon. Mario: Not really. He picked his hammer up. I looked behind me, in case a Toad would try to backstab me. I saw there a was a circle of fire preventing the toads to interfere with the 4 battles. I transformed into a statue in case Mario would try to hit me with the hammer. He did. I transformed back into normal form. Mario's arm was still shaking. He swung again. I swung my club. The shock made both of our weapons fly backwards. Mario tried to jump. I dodged sideways. As I freed his way, Mario ran to get his hammer. I threw Marth, who, for the whole fight, stayed in his shell in my left hand. He hit Mario, who flew in the air and fell under the ground. The life lost music was heard. Mini Mario was back and Mini Luigi was with him. Mario raised his arm, trying to use an item. He failed. ???: Looking for this? Shadowluigi appeared with a fireflower in his hand. Luigi: Woa! Mario: Mama Mia! ~~~Narrator Switch~~~ Bowser Jr.: What's wrong with you? Sponge6325: What's wrong with you!? You joined the ennemy. Bowser Jr.: The enemy? They're Mario and Luigi! Sponge7325: Murderer of thousands of Koopas and Goombas just to get one princess that would get kidnapped again the next month? Is that a hero? Bowser Jr.: It's better than being with Bowser. Sponge7325: I'm not with Bowser, I'm with the people. I tried to slash. The armor made is useless. He tried to punch me. I dodged. I started to run around. He was running slower, being younger and wearing an armor. Bowser Jr.: Hold Still! Sponge7325: Lol. He shot ice. He froze a leg. Suddenly, we were stuck in a ring of fire that made both of us stuck in an arena with Eric, Luigi, Shadow, Rilez and Mario. I used some of the fire's energy to light my fire and melt the ice on my foot. Bowser was a bit more surprised than I and when he turned back, he noticed my leg was free. He shot again. I dodged. I continued running. He was running even slower. He shot again. He stopped running. He probably was too thirsty to continue. I tackled him. My shoulders didn't feel good after and he fell on the ground. I hit his arm by the cannon opening. I put my foot on his belly. Bowser Jr.: Crap! I'm stuck! Sponge7325: Change side or I'll finish you. Bowser Jr.: Try! I raised my sword and I was about to repeat thing I just did. I put my sword on fire. Bowser Jr.: Stop! I'll join you guys again. I understand, but mainly I don't want to get my ass kicked. Sponge7325: Lol. Here, take some water. We watched. Eric's fight was already done. Shadow was fighting Luigi. He had his gun out. Luigi had his hammer. Shadow shot. Luigi's hammer blocked the shot. Shadow lit his hand. He ran and punched. The hammer broke to pieces. Luigi suddenly didn't see Shadow while he was right in front of him. Shadow punched him a couple times. He died like Mario soon did. The scene Rilez described then followed. ~~~Narrator Switch~~~ Apparently I was taking on the Blue Toad. Blue Toad: You're screwed because when I have a fireflower I'm invincible! The fireflower burns a fire in my heart that increases hate and... I stopped listening there. He was still talking. I didn't give a damn, took out an arrow, aimed and shot. He became just big, no fire powers. Blue Toad: No! You must pay! But first, I must get a fireflower. He tried to run away. I shot a fire arrow. I controlled the fire to make a circle including only Sponge, Shadow, Bowser, Mario, Luigi, Rilez, Blue Toad and I. Retoard: If you toads don't surrender, you guys will pay and you will die one by one mysteriously again. Not a single toad had a weapon after that. Oops, right, my fight. Blue Toad was in the air. I slashed my bow. To clarify, my bow is made of a special metal, kinda like frozen steel, but of fire and is flexible, so I made two blades. Toad became small. I used part of the fire circle to do a wave. Toad lost. I then sat and waited that every other fight finished. Then, there was some kind of talk. Mario raised his arm, trying to use an item. He failed. ???: Looking for this? Shadowluigi appeared with a fireflower in his hand. Luigi: Woa! Mario: Mama Mia! RilezTNUKI: Listen to me Mario, I'll tell you my conditions for this war to end, so listen carefully. Mario: What if I don't agree? RilezTNUKI: This. Rilez poked Luigi in the belly. He lost another life. Eric: HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Sponge7325: O my god! Bowser Jr.: I'm glad I switched sides. Luigi reappeared. Luigi: It's my last life. Mario: Oh... Okay, I'll listen. RilezTNUKI: You won't kill another koopa, goomba or bob-omb unless he attacked you first. Second, don't try to take Peach back anymore, we'll take care of that, or more precisely, I will. Mario: Okay, deal. I stopped the ring. Retoard came in with every weapon. He was armed to the teeth. Retoard: Here, guys, I took every single weapon they had. RilezTNUKI: Aren't you supposed to talk like a retard. Retoard: That's a fake identity I created based on my name and mainly because I'm against what Toads do in the castle and in the communities. Guys, let me join you. Shadowluigi1014: Okay. Eric: You still love pizza though, right? Retoard: Hell yeah! Eric: Nice. RilezTNUKI: I must stay for rebuilding. Marth: No, go. Leo: Make Bowser pay for allying with Willeyd and make sure that Willeyd dies a painful death. RilezTNUKI: Are you guys going to be okay? Leo: ONe more, one less, what's the big difference? RilezTNUKI: If you insist... We went back to the HQ. Absent was training 1 vs 1 with King and JeanMarc was training with James35. JeanMarc saw us, nodded quickly and returned to his duel. James didn't expect him to look away. Jean was at a disadvantage. James disarmed Jean. Jean kicked him the stomach. James dropped his weapon. He lit his fists on fire. He jumped. James35: Falcon... PUNCH! JeanMarc slided under him. The punch hit the ground. The fire after the collision with the was so big that it it Jean. The fire was so intense I felt the heat from here. JeanMarc was panting, his back on the ground. JeanMarc: Good job, you win. I think I should need some time to practice my dark powers more. I don't have as much as Absent, Kerby or Shadow. JeanMarc turned his head to face us. JeanMarc: Hey guys! Who are those two? Shadowluigi1014: They're RilezTUNKI and Retoard. JeanMarc: Okay. Welcome guys! Woa, Sponge and Bowser are already Sparring. Kerby then came. He was looking pretty pissed off. Kerbykong: I want to spar with someone. Eric: How about you against me? Kerbykong: No... You, Sponge and Bowser against me. Sponge7325: Alright! Bowser Jr.: Nice. Eric: We're gonna own him. I pulled out my Bow. I suddenly felt some kind of hate, some kind of rage against Kerbykong. I mean, he's so cocky, he just leads us and does nothing. JeanMarc or Shadow would do much greater leaders. Eric: Aah! Sponge7325: Aiah!! Bowser Jr.: Banzai! We all ran to slash him. I lit my bow on my fire. Sponge did the same with his sword. Kerby shouted: Kerbykong: Chaos control! He disappeared. He controls chaos! He must've made me enraged to make me do this dumb move. Bowser and Sponge each got hit by a blade of my bow. Sponge hit me and Bowser hit Sponge too. Bowser transformed his sword into his Samus suit. Kerby appeared and punched Bowser. ANyone would've been hurt at the hand with such a powerful hit on an armor and Bowser would've stayed still. However, Kerby was okay and Bowser flew 10 feet back, hitting Sponge during the process. I shot a fire arrow when Kerby wasn't looking. Right before it hit him. He caught the arrow, absorbed the fire and said: Kerbykong: Chaos blast! It hurt. I fell on the ground. I couldn't breathe. I dropped my bow, which flew somewhere during the process. I couldn't get up. I think he paralysed me. Kerby finally made his dark paladin sword appear, kinda like in kingdom hearts, probably with chaos control. It was twice the lenght of a normal human. Anyone else couldn't lift it, but he could easily with one hand. He swung it. With the flat part of the blade, Bowser and Sponge flew again. Bowser's armor wore off and rebecame a sword. We, all three of us, couldn't get up. Kerbykong: You lost. I'm happy that I still haven't lost all my talent. JeanMarc: What do you mean? James35: Did you meet Willeyd? Kerbykong: Let me explain, I... To be continued... Please click here: http://wamjelly.com/?ref=45330
Re: Chapter 16: The War's Conclusion		15:59 on April 05, 2012	Quote.
JeanMarc Posts: 748 Moderator Watch: Disabled. Turn on?	Dude, just check for fun, this is more than 12 word-pages long (Times-New Roman, simple-spaced) and 2 lines in the 13th page. I'm pretty sure this is the longest post ever made on CND. Please click here: http://wamjelly.com/?ref=45330
Re: Chapter 16: The War's Conclusion		17:53 on April 05, 2012	Quote.
rilezTNUKI Posts: 218 New Player Watch: Disabled. Turn on?	Awesome chapter, and it seems Toad didn't leave his bazooka at home this time! 3DS Friend Code: 2535-3781-8442 Mario Kart 7: http://cnd-online.net/fView.php?forum=cndOff&;thread=564 Kid Icarus: http://cnd-online.net/fView.php?forum=cndOff&;thread=585
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